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Post  Dick Fitzwell on Wed Aug 29, 2012 5:17 pm

this is an original arrangement of Greensleeves that I came up with the other day: https://dl.dropbox.com/u/45177652/Lady%20Greensleeves.wav

I have been playing for a little over a year, I guess

whaddaya think?

edit: I didn't know what to do for an intro, suggestions would be welcome

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Post  blue moon on Wed Aug 29, 2012 7:14 pm

I can't open the webpage, delavan.

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Post  bluebottle on Thu Aug 30, 2012 12:43 am

Bluebottle's no musician but reckons that Mr Tinkham's version is jolly good and would please good King Hal king no end. cheers


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Post  pinhedz on Thu Aug 30, 2012 12:48 am

Sounds good. I have one suggestion, and that's that there are some spots (like 1:07 and 1:56, for example) where you could resolve to a major chord instead of minor. It makes for a nice surprise and keeps the listeners on their toes.

As for the intro, I couldn't say anything specific without getting hands-on and fooling around with it, but I'm imagining some kind of filigree to fill in the gaps there.

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